Preliminary exercise learner response

1) Feedback

WWW:

You have displayed some excellent editing and technical skills throughout this preliminary exercise. Great costume - in particular the choice of black and white to connote character roles e.g. protagonist and antagonist to create meaning for the audience.

EBI:
The audio levels were quite low in places especially during the dialogue section please remember to listen to the project back at 100% volume level to ensure you can clearly hear the dialogue. This will then mean you do not need to add subtitles to your project.

2) Personal Feedback

WWW:

• Contrasting outfits to distinguish good vs evil
• Decent editing skills
• Good acting from the characters

EBI:

• Include variety of editing tools to enhance the effect of the fantasy genre and in order to make it more enjoyable for the audience
• Make the dialogue used more clearer and change volumes of background music when characters are speaking to 0
• Include more unique camera angles to enhance the curiosity for the viewer

3) For next time:

Organisation - The organisation of the clips may have been arranged so that the clips lasted longer in order to enhance the tension and curiosity for the watchers

Actors - Cast actors that can be used to re-film in certain locations in case the production does not turn out well

Editing - Research and enhance levels of the fantasy genre through the editing so that the main theme is presented better